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Thursday, 1 September 2016

water cycle information report

The Water Cycle


The water cycle is a never ending process between land, sea and the atmosphere. The water changes into liquids, gases and solids throughout the process. There are 5 processes  throughout this process they are evaporation, condensation, precipitation and
runoff/ground-water.

Evaporation


One of the steps from the cycle is Evaporation, Evaporation is where the sun heats up the all the lakes, rivers and ocean. This is an invisible process that turns ice and liquids into gas Also the hotter the sun the quicker this would happen so you can thank the sun for all these rainy days. But for this part of the water cycle  to work the water from the earth's surface needs to go back up into the sky to come back pouring down again. After the water from the earth floats up and turns into a gas the gas will turn into a cloud which is called condensation.


condensation/precipitation


Condensation and precipitation is the 2nd and 3rd steps of the recycled progress which contains clouds and water. Condensation is where the water vapor gas turns into water and mixes with dust to form a cloud.
Once the cloud is heavy enough and can't hold anymore water some water from the cloud will fall (that is called precipitation.) There are other types of precipitation like: snow and hail but it depends on how cold it is for it to snow and hail. once it rains the water has to go somewhere and most of it goes back into the the ocean or rivers and lakes and some of the time it does a runoff down a hill back into lakes, rivers or the ocean.

runoff/ground-water


How else is water meant to get back into the ocean to do this cycle all over again well it runs down off a hill back into the ocean or the lakes and rivers. Some of the water soaks into the ground to create ground water and it also goes into your garden to help your crops go. The way water moves underground ids either sideways or downwards and eventually goes through the vents back into the rivers, lakes and ocean.


In conclusion the water cycle is an invisible never ending progress.

Sunday, 29 May 2016

short story



For this piece of writing I have focussing on my vocabulary and punctuation. I have been learning to
  • use a range of precise vocabulary to communicate meaning (Year ⅞)
  • use all basic punctuation independently and attempt more complex punctuation (eg semicolons, colons, parentheses) (Year 7/8






The pieces of my writing that are highlighted green are where I have shown my vocabulary and punctuation goal
My Story...


"Chloe get off" Zoella yelled as her dog was licking her face in bed , Chloe sits there silently looking at Zoella. But then the silence was interuped by Zoellas mum ( Chantell ) yelling "hurry up get out of bed we are already late, pick up your day bag and get in the car" "but i,m not dressed" Zoella replies "well get dressed"



Once Zoella was dressed she came through to her mother screaming "STOP YELLING IN THE HOUSE" "you were yelling first" Zoella argues "who's house is this oh yeah its mine" "and when its time to tidy it magicly becomes my house" Zoella and her mum argues. 
They were just about to leave for church but then Zoellas father comes in and has 
a few animals and crops off their farm and Zoellas little sister ( Molly ) "QUICK GET ALL YOU CAN AND GET INTO THE BASMENT" Zoellas father (Luke) screams in a hurry 
"why" Zoella replies "No time to waste will tell you when you get into the basment now quick grab some food, bottles of water and some mattreses QUICK WE HAVE TEN MINUTES GO GO GO!!!!" Zoella grabs 3 boxes of pizza,all the fruit and