Friday 24 July 2015

Co-operative plays

What: we worked together in a group to learn and perform a play for the class 
So what: my character was Tyrone he thought he was so popular and perfect my group worked well together by listing to each other's ideas I tried to make my voice sound very popular
Now what: I need to improve on facial expressions.

2 comments:

  1. + = you told the reader what was going on and you told what the characters were and what they were doing
    --} = try to get the picture round the rightway

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  2. That it looks like you put a lot of effort in to the description
    try and get the picture round the right way.

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