Friday, 18 September 2015


Now what what do I still need to work on: I still need to work on my vocabulary and spelling    
What: we are learning to write about a character of our choice 

So what: here is some be kind be specific and be helpful feed back I got from Hailey


  1. I like the way you told us a description of your character you chose.
    I think it was quite hard to understand to read your part in yellow writing
    Think about adding some more descriptive words about your character.

  2. i like the way that it is nice and net and you can reed this will done