Friday 18 September 2015

Writing

Now what what do I still need to work on: I still need to work on my vocabulary and spelling    
What: we are learning to write about a character of our choice 

So what: here is some be kind be specific and be helpful feed back I got from Hailey
 
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 September 2015 at 10:49

    I like the way you told us a description of your character you chose.
    I think it was quite hard to understand to read your part in yellow writing
    Think about adding some more descriptive words about your character.

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  2. Anonymous19 October 2015 at 10:44

    i like the way that it is nice and net and you can reed this will done

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